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Mistake Number One

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***NOTE: THIS IS A ONE PART STORY!!! I WILL NOT MAKE A SECOND PART!!!!!!***

Sakura: Why?! Why did this happen again...why do I keep falling for the same all bullshit and the simple words he says to me!

A pinky haired teenager lied down on the soft bed and sank down with tears. Again she had nothing but a broken heart and no happy ending. Something like that only exists in fairytails, never in real life. The warm tears rolled down her cheek like a snowflake in winter, the feeling of this was just to much again. She dug her phone out of her back pocted and read through the last text message again.

Text: It's been over.

Sakura: To think...I spent nine effin' months on him! That jackass who does he think he is anyway?! I can't believe he just dropped me like that.

Throwing her tissue on the floor, the young girl coverd her body in her comforter and let her head hit the pillow. She was out. The next morning she work up to the sound of that shower, he brother Samu had already woken up to go to work.

Sakura: "Great, what another wonderful day..." She said picking up her phone and reading her missed text messages.

Text: Girl! Dancing tonight(: everyones going!! Pick me up at eight!

Sakura: Great!...not...

Running up the long flight of stairs, Sakura sat down at the bar in the kitchen and took the cereal out of the cabinet and poured herself a bowl of milk.

Samu: Morning squirt.

Sakura: Morning.

Samu: What do you have planned for tonight?

Sakura: Ino wants me to go dancing with her.

Samu: Have fun with that.

Sakura: I just dont know if I want too.

Samu: Why not?

Sakura: Boy trouble.

Samu: Your to young to date anyway.

Sakura: I'm 16.

Samu: And I'm 21.

Sakura: "Yeah Yeah" She laughed as she asked where their parents were.

Samu: "Their gone for the week. Mom had a doctors appt. over in America and dad decided to go with her. Why do you think I'm here? But I have to go to work. See ya squirt!" He said as he walked out of their front door.

Later that night at 7:15, Sakura decided to finally be getting ready to go to the dance with her best friend that night. She straightend her hair and put on her favorite eyeliner and mascara. She slipped into a pair of shorts and a shirt that slid over her right shoulder. She picked Ino up at her door at 8:39.

Ino: Ah! Girl you look so cute!

Sakura: Thanks...

Ino: Whats wrong?

Sakura: Nothing...Just yesterday with Sasuke...

Ino: Sakura, he's just an ass. He dropped you, he made that mistake.

Sakura: We werent even dating.

Ino: He still dropped you, and you guys were talking about dating until he just stopped talking to you and never did.

Sakura: I just wish I just never went into that house...

Ino: We're going to go dancing and find us some hot guys.

Sakura: "Yeah!" She said as she faked a smile.

Walking into the dance, the two girls quickly found a spot on the dance floor and began to move their hips. After only few songs the girls stepped off the dance floor and back into the main area.

Ino: Sakura! Sakura! Nooooo!

Sakura: "What?" She asked still walking.

Ino: "It's Sasuke!" She said pointing toward the entrence.

Sakura: Oh shit! Why the fuck is he here?!

Ino: I don't know, lets just walk the other way...

A few hours later everything went back to normal, Ino and Sakura hit the dance floor with Tenten and Temari. Sasuke and the boys stood in their corner acting 'oh too cool' to be seen out on the floor with all the others. Occasionally, Sasuke's and Sakura's eyes would meet for a moment then play it off like nothing had ever happened between them.

Ino: "Hey, you okay?!" She aked yelling over the music playing in the background.

Sakura: No.. I think... I think I'm just going to go home...

Ino: Okay... Just call me so I know you got home alright.

Sakura: "Okay." She said as she headed for the door.

Walking out the exit, she pulled the keys from her pocket and pressed the 'unlock' button on the remote. Sitting in the drivers seat she started the car and turned the stereo up as loud as it could go. Blaring 'Best Thing I Never Had' by Beyonce she put the car in reverse and began to back up.

A loud crash and being thrown foward, her seat belt locked up at good time, Sakura jumped. Knowing that she had hit something she look in her rearview mirrior and began to scream louder. Stepping out of the car she had seen the other driver do the same. Dieing of embarrassment she waited to see what fate was planning for her next.

Sakura: I am so sorry!

Shee (Shii): Its fine, are you alright?

Sakura: "Yeah, Im so sorry about your ca-" He words slipped away from her.

Shee: Hello?

Sakura: Y-Your Shee!! T-The famous singer! Your him!

Shee: "Yeah." He said with a chuckle.

Sakura: Oh my god I totaled a rockstars car!

Shee: "You're fine." He said giving another laugh.

Sakura: I...Shit! How am I going to get home..

Shee: I'll take you.

Sakura: If you didnt just notice, I kinda just backed into you.

Shee: "Do you really think I have just one car?" He said dangling keys in front of her.

Going down the highway Sakura sat in the passanger seat of a dark blue and black Bugatti Veyron (most expensive car in the world) she could feel her heart begin to beat to the sound of the music and the vibration of the bass agianst the seat. Her head down, she began to twittle her thumbs together and wait for something to come to mind to make this car ride a little less awkward.

Shee: You okay?

Sakura: No.. I mean yes. I guess so.

Shee: "This is your house right?" He asked.

Sakura: "Yeah..." She said putting her hand on the door handle.

Shee: Wait, I better get your number, you know to call you about the crash?

Sakura: "Oh right..." She said putting her number into her phone and began to walk away.

Shee: "Hey, who ever the guy is that you're thinking about... hes a fool for letting you go." He said from the rolled down window.

Sakura: How did you know...?

Shee: "I've been threw all that. Bye." He said and began to back up and pull away.

A week went by slowly, Sakura told Ino and the other girls about her incounter with Shee and it quickly spread around school. Never talking to him after that night, things mostly went back to the way that they were before the run-in. Sasuke and Sakura had still not spoke and her heart had began the long healing process.

Ino: "So what should we do tonight girls?" She asked in the car ride to Sakura's house from school.

Sakura: Let's just stay in to night, I finally just go ungrounded and don't play on being there again.

Temari: You're no fun.

Sakura: Oh, bite me...

Ino: Sakura, your parents arnt even home.

Sakura: "Exactly." They said walking into her large pink bedroom.

Hinata: L-Let's go to the mall?

Ino: That an awesome idea Hinata!

Temari: Totally!

Sakura: "Hello?" She said answering her phone.

Man: Hey pinky, feeling better?

Sakura: Who is this?

Man: That's a little hurtful Pinky.

Sakura: You must have the wrong number.

Man: "No, I think Im speaking to Sakura Haruno." He said with a laugh. "You were nervus when we ment , now you don't even want to talk to me anymore, what happened? Did you back into another rockstar and forget about me?"

Sakura: "Shee?!" She asked as she turned the phone on speaker and told the other girls to be quiet.

Shee: You got it.

Sakura: Why are you calling?

Shee: I wanted to see what you were doing tonight.

Sakura: "Nothing why?" She said looking up at her friends with all huge smiles.

Shee: Go out with me tonight.

Sakura: Are you serious?

Shee: "Yep, I'll be there at eight to pick you up. And dress sharp." the converstaion ended with a click.

Running and jumping around with their voices turned on all the way to loud, the three girls helped Sakura get ready for her night out. Her hair was curled up and in a loose poneytaile. A light red dress worn with a black flower necklace and black heeles were her clothes of choice. She wore a light amount of brown eyeliner to maker her jade eyes seem bigger and pink lipstick to make her lips look fuller.

Sakura: So, do I look ready?!

Ino: Hell yes!

Sakura: Good! This is so amazing!

Hinata: "Hello?" She said as a call came in on her cell phone.

Man: Where are you at?

Hinata: Sakura-chan's house.

Man: I got to see you! I'll be over in a minute!!

Hinata: "W-Wait please-" But he had already hung up.

Sakura: Who was that Hinata?

Hinata: N-Naruto-kun...

Sakura: What did he want?

Hinata: H-He said that he w-wanted to see me for a second...

Sakura: Go Hinata! You're finally getting him!

Ino: About time too!

Temari: "Lucky girl Hinata" She said with a wink.

Hearing the doorbell ring the four girls ran up the long flight of carpted stairs to the large wooden front door of the house. Opening thoses doors the four girls saw two unlikly boys with Naruto. Appearing in the doorway stood a pale boy with dark eyes,  he was known as Sai. And there, standing on his left side stood the boy who had just ripped her heart out. Hands dug deep into his jean pockets he leaned against the house.

Saskue: "Hey." He said in a soft voice with seductive eyes.

Sakura: W-What are you doing here?

Sasuke: Just stopped by...

Naruto: Hey Hinata! Can we talk?

Hinata: S-Sure Naruto-kun.

Sakura: "Why don't you guys come in..." She said worried.

Hinata: "What is it Naruto-kun?" She asked as she sat on the couch.

Sakura: "We're just going to go in the kitchen and let you two talk about things." She said with an evil smile and fallowed the others into the kitchen.

Sai: So Sakura, what are you all dress up for?

Ino: She has a big date tonight!

Choking on a drink of water Sauke looked at Sakura quickly with a distant and unpleased face.

Sakura: What's that look for?

Sasuke: Hn...

Sakura: If you have something to say Sasuke Uchiha, then say it now.

Hearing a car horn hank and a knock at the door, Sakura's face quickly lit up with joy.

Sakura: Oh my god hes here!

Ino: Quick go get your purse and we'll keep him here.

Sakura: "Okay." She said running back down the stairs in he high black pumps.

Ino: "Hey, Shee." She said opening the door.

Shee: Hey Ino, is Sakura ready yet?

Ino: Yea, she's getting her purse.

Shee: "Awesome is sh-" before he could finish he was interrupted.

Naruto: "H-Hey you're Shee!! Holly shit guys Shee's here!" He said pointing.

Shee: "Yeah it's me." He said with a chuckle.

Naruto: What are you doing here?!

Sakura: "Sorry it took me so long." She said walking back up the stairs.

Shee: I'm here to pick up my beautiful date this evening.

Sakura: "You're to sweet." She said with a chucke and he took her hand and opened her car door.

A few hours had passed and Ino and Hinata were still at Sakura's house watching movies and eationg popcore with Sai, Naruto, and Sasuke. After Sakura had left the awkward level began to fade away and things got back to normal... or how 'normal' really was for them...

Sai: You do too have a small dick Naruto. Theres no point in hiding it.

Naruto: No I don't! Your such a creep!!

Sai: And you have a small dick...

Hearing a door open behind them the five teenage friends turned their head.

Sakura: "I'm back!" She said wearing a large smile.

Ino: Oh my god oh my god how was it?!

Sakura: Better then you could ever imagin it Ino!

Hinata: What did you all do?

Sakura: "He took me to the harbor which at frirst was kinda scared but then he took me out on his boat! It was covered in lights and had soft music playing. We ate the best stake I have ever had... EVER! We danced a little and we sat under the stars and just talked. The whole time he was so sweet and caring! Unlike some people I know...." She said as she shot a look of anger at Sasuke.

Sasuke: "This is bullshit! Im outa here." He said slamming the front door of Sakura's house behind him.

Sakura: Was it something I said...?

Sasuke: Who the hell does she think she is?! Who the fuck said she could go out with someone other then me?! Fuck this.

Nine long months had gone by since that time...Sasuke and Sakura had never sponken a single word to each other since that day. Keeping her relationship with Shee, Sakura loved her knew life. Sasuke kep on with sports and began dating a new girl named Karin. Things seemed almost.... perfect, just for a moment in time. School went by like normal, Naruto was standing with SAsuke at his locker waiting to go into their waights class, which was the last class of the long school day.

Naruto: Hurry up will ya?

Sasuke: Shut up dobe!

Girl 1: Did you hear?

Girl 2: Hear what?

Girl 1: Sakura and Shee broke up!!

Girl 2: No way! Get outa here!

Naruto: Sasuke... Did you hear that?

Sasuke: Yea.

Later that day the school bell rang and all the students rushed out of their classrooms and flooded the hallways. Everyone went to their cars and began to talk with their other friends.

Ino: Want us to come over?

Sakura: Yeah...I-I just need someone today.

Temari: We understand...

Naruto: "Hinata! Hinata Hinata Hinata!!!" He said running up to his girlfriend and throwing his arms around her.

Hinata: H-Hello Naruto-kun...

Sakura: "I...I think I should go." She said with her head down and getting into her car.

Ino: We'll be over in a bit, okay?

Sakura: "Alright." She said as she drive away.

Ino: "You idiot! What the hell was that?!" She said grabbing Naruto by his shirt.

Naruto: What?!

Ino: Cant you see that shes hurt?!

Hinata: C-Calm down Ino-chan h-he didnt know.

Naruto: About Sakura and Shee?

Ino: So you did know! She's really hurt!

Sasuke: "Who cares..." He said under his breath.

Temari: Excuse me...

Sasuke: I said 'who cares'.

Temari: Oh thats right your just a heartless asshole that you wouldnt have any feelings...

Sasuke: Hn..

Temari: You hurt her worse then this you know...

Sasuke: Whatever...

Temari: Your just a bastard... you don't give a damn about anyones feelings but your own!

Sasuke: Sakura moved on from me! Thats not my fault! If I could go back she would have never met Shee!

Ino: Sasuke.. were you jealous?

Sasuke: N-No!

Ino: You were so jealous about Sakura and Shee!

Naruto: Really? I wouldnt have ever known.

Sai: Me either!

Sasuke: Im not jealous you idiots!

Ino: Do you actully have feelings for her?!

Sasuke: "...n-no...." He said turning his head.

Temari: Your such a liar...

Ino: You need to go and tell her how you feel Sasuke...

Sasuke: Forget about it, thats fairytale shit.

Ino: And what's wrong with that?!

Sasuke: Tsk.. I'm leaving.

Temari: That asshole.

The next day came swiftly. School had gone by just like normal all except for one thing... there was no Sakura to be found. Blowing up her phone with missed calls and text messages, but there was never any answer.

Ino: "It just went straight to voicemail..." She said as she hung up the phone.

Hinata: What are we going t-to do?

Ino: I guess just go back to her house after school to see if shes alright.

Naruto: You don't think that Sakura-chan would do something stupid would she?

Ino: Hell no! Even if she is depressed she would never do something 'THAT' stupid.

Naruto: How was she when you guys went over yesterday?

Hinata: N-Not good...poor Sakura-chan was so sad...

Ino: Yeah...I feel bad that theres nothing we can do for her.

RING!!!!

Naruto: Well we better get to calss...

Ino: Yeah, we'll go to see her after school.

Arriving to their class room Naruto, Ino and Hinata took their seats waiting for their always later teacher Kakashi.

Naruto Thinking: Sasuke-teme isnt here?

Meanwhile... Sasuke pulling out of the school parking lot in his brand new black sports car he speeds down the street while taking a left, never slowing down.

Sasuke Thinking: "Who the fuck told that little princess that she didnt have to come to school?! She's getting a huge ass kicking for making me go and get her ass." He thought as he pulled into her driveway.

Getting out of his car, Sasuke knocked on the big wooden front door of the Haruno home. There was no answer. Ringing the door bell over and over her finally got fed up with waiting. Walking around to the back gate her unlached it and fallowed the rock path into the backyard. Coming to the window well which led to Sakuras room the one he would use to sneak in every other weekend, he unlocked the top. Crawling into the small space he pulled his way threw and appeared in Sakura's room.

Sasuke: "Sakura?" He yelled turning on the lights.

Sakura: Ugh...

Sasuke Thinking: S-She's asleep.

Sakura: ...

Sasuke: "Wake the hell up stupid!" He said shaking her.

Sakura: N...S-Sasuke?!

Sauke: Hn.

Sakura: "Why the hell are you here?!" She said jumping out of bed.

Sasuke: Woundering why the hell you arnt at school!

Sakura: Thats none of your concern!

Sasuke: Shut up Sakura and get dressed!

Sakura: How the hell do you think you are?! My father?!

Sasuke: I'm tring to help you, now get your lazy ass out of bed!

Sakura: "If you want to help me then just leave...I don't want to see you or talk to you! That would be the best thing you could do to 'help' me!" She said as she began to cry.

Sasuke: ...

Sakura: S-So just please...go.

Sasuke: "I can't do that." He said grabbing her wrist and pulling her into a tight hug.

Sakura: S-Sasuke...

Sasuke: Shut up for just a minute will ya? Just listen to me.

Sakura: ...

Sasuke: I'm really sorry for what happened between you and Shee. And I'm also sorry for what I did to you. Believe it or not it killed me too but I had to do it. I knew that I would hurt you in the end and I wanted to stop that before it happened but I made it worse. I don't know what else there is to say but I'm sorry.

Sakura: Saying 'sorry' doesnt always mean things are okay again.

Sasuke: I know but I don't know what else to say.

Sakura: ...She didnt break up with me...I broke up with him.

Sasuke: Why?!

Sakura: He was going to be on toure for the next year, in and out of the country and not going to be able to talk. Nothing could hurt worse then that.

Sasuke: So what? You just gave up on him?!

Sakura: Yes I did! I can't deal with that!

Sasuke: So you left the one you loved and all you do is sleep and cry?!

Sakura: He wasnt the one I truly loved Sasuke!!

Sasuke: What?

Sakura: The one I love is you! It always has been!!

Sasuke: S-Sakura...

Sakura: "So just shut up! Call me stupid I don't care anymore!" She said crying again.

Sasuke: You are stupid Sakura...

Sakura: "Huh?" She said wiping her tears away.

Sasuke: You're stupid for crying over me when I....when I love you too.

Sakura: What?

Sasuke: Don't make me say it again...

Sakura: "S-Sasuke! Thank you..." She said tackeling him onto the bed.

Sasuke: For what?

Sakura: Coming to see me when all I needed was you.

Sasuke: D-Don't be dumb Sakura...

Sakura: "Can we just stay like this for awhile Sasuke?" She said resting her head on his muscular chest.

Sasuke: "I guess so..." He said with a smile and a kiss on her forehead.
Sakura is a young highschool girl strugling with love from a boy named Sasuke. She meets a famous rockstar named Shee and quickly falles in love...
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This was really cute. 👌🏾😩💘😊